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NEW TOS: AFTER THE CREDITS: Amok Time [PG] S, Ch 1/1
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Ster Julie
2011-01-13 22:54:04 UTC
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Title: AFTER THE CREDITS: Amok Time
Author: Ster Julie
Contact: ***@yahoo.com
Codes: TOS; Spock, Chapel; h/c?
Word count: 1,000 exactly!
Rated: PG
Part: 1/1

Summary: Spock realizes that he needs to make amends.

A/N: Thank you to the Vulcan Language Dictionary for the correct
spelling of qom'i, and to the Czech resource Star Trek Sickbay - TOS -
Transcripts for the dialogue for "Amok Time."

Disclaimer: Don't own Star Trek, or much of anything else, for that
matter. I'll put everything back when I'm through, honest.

—ooOoo—

"Come on, Spock," Captain Kirk said as they took their leave of Doctor
McCoy. "Let's go mind the store."

Spock's knowledge of Earth idioms had increased exponentially since he
met James Kirk and Leonard McCoy, so he didn't need to question Kirk's
seemingly erroneous perception that the Bridge was but a vendor's
stall. But as he followed his commanding officer out of Sickbay, Spock
puzzled over the meaning of the new expression he had heard the good
doctor use, "In a pig's eye."

During his ruminating, Spock's acute sense of hearing caught the sound
of instruments being stowed with more force than prudent. He turned to
the sound and found Nurse Chapel shutting a cabinet with a bang as she
muttered something under her breath.

"'Nurse, would you mind, please?'" she mimicked bitterly. "Well, I
certainly do mind! I was dismissed like a child! How can they expect
me to care for my patients if I'm not privy to crucial information?"
She paused to slam an empty carton into the 'cycler. "I was so worried
about him and now they just dismiss me…"

Spock paused. The nurse was obviously in distress, and it was
obviously because of him.

"A moment, please, Captain," the Vulcan asked quietly. The Captain
followed his First Officer's gaze over to Nurse Chapel.

"Take all the time you need, Spock," Kirk said, sensing that Spock
would need more than just a moment for this conversation. "I'll see
you on the Bridge."

"Understood," Spock replied. He moved closer to the nurse's
workstation. "Christine?" he called softly.

Nurse Chapel jumped at the sound of her given name on Spock's lips.
She schooled her features as best she could before turning to face the
Vulcan.

"Yes, Mr. Spock?" she said, anxiously hoping that no remnants of her
petty thoughts remained.

Spock found that he was touched by Chapel's feeble attempts at
control.

"I wish to apologize to you," the Vulcan said so sincerely that
Chapel's heart ached for him.

"Apologize?" she feigned. "For what?" For the humiliation-by-soup? her
mind supplied. For making me the laughingstock of the ship? Can I help
it that I was worried about you? That when the captain came into
sickbay looking dead, I feared the worst for you?

Spock struggled with his own inner demons. He could still hear himself
yelling, yelling at the woman, "What is this?" as she screamed.
"Poking, prying. If I want anything from you, I'll ask for it!"

"First, I frightened you," Spock admitted in a bare whisper, "then I
belittled you in front of the crew." He lowered his head in shame. "No
one deserves that kind of treatment, especially not you. You have been
nothing but kind to me." Spock raised contrite eyes to Chapel. "I am
truly sorry, Christine," he confessed.

Chapel was touched by Spock's genuineness. She dismissed his apology
with a watery smile.

"You weren't yourself," she excused.

Spock shook his head. "On the contrary," he corrected, "I was myself,
my basest self."

Chapel cast her eyes about, desperate to break the uncomfortable
silence. She changed subjects.

"I didn't realize that you were married, Mr. Spock," she observed. "No
wonder you resisted my advances."

"I was endeavoring to remain faithful to my commitment," he said
bleakly.

Chapel smiled sadly. "That was so very noble of you."

Spock knew that Chapel melancholy was because she was still mourning
the loss of her own fiancé, Dr. Roger Korby. She knew what it was like
to be separated from one's betrothed, waiting faithfully for years
only to find oneself alone in the end.

Spock shook his head again. "Not so noble," he remarked. "When you
returned to my cabin to tell me that we were bound for Vulcan, I …
tried to seduce you."

Chapel was confused. "You did? When?" she asked.

Then she remembered Spock's voice as he said, "I had a most startling
dream. You were trying to tell me something, but I couldn't hear you…
It would be illogical for us to protest against our natures. Don't you
think?"

"That was a seduction?" she puzzled, returning to the present.

Spock looked at Chapel sheepishly. "I obviously need to work on my
'pick up lines' now that I am no longer married," he admitted.

Nurse Chapel's face registered her surprise. "You're not married
anymore?" she asked. "What happened?"

"T'Pring rejected me," Spock replied bitterly, "in favor of another."

"Oh, Mister Spock!" Chapel exclaimed. "How awful for you!"

"Perhaps the fault is mine for not being more present to her," Spock
considered.

"And perhaps she is just a foolish, cruel person with no honor and
with decidedly questionable taste!" Chapel declared.

Spock was hard-pressed to hide the smile that threatened to burst upon
his face. He never would admit to having something so q’omi as an ego,
but perhaps he was lying to himself. T'Pring's rejection had wounded
his very masculinity (especially since his replacement was so un-
esthetically pleasing!)

Spock looked at Nurse Chapel, at Christine, and recognized a person of
great passion and compassion, an intelligent woman with honor and a
noble beauty, a nurturer who was already mending his fractured,
rejected self. He found Christine's unconditional acceptance of him to
be a balm to soothe that wound.

Nurse Chapel was shocked when Spock took her hand and raised it to his
face, as if he was going to kiss it. Instead, he lifted her hand to
his forehead in a sign of respect.

"This one is grateful your forgiveness," he said formally. "This one
is grateful for your devoted service."

Christine smiled shyly in response.

Spock bowed his farewell and resumed his trip to the Bridge. He
considered his conversation with Christine in the light of all that
had recently happened. Spock promised himself that he would not leap
into any new relationships just yet. He recognized a need to re-center
himself in the Disciplines before pursuing a new spouse.

Spock only hoped that Christine would still be waiting for him in the
end.

END
Ster Julie
2011-01-15 01:59:37 UTC
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Oops. I reported my own story as spam! <head-desk>
unknown
2011-01-17 07:39:51 UTC
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On Fri, 14 Jan 2011 17:59:37 -0800 (PST), Ster Julie
Post by Ster Julie
Oops. I reported my own story as spam! <head-desk>
wouldn't a "face palm" be more appropriate?



:)
Ster Julie
2011-01-19 05:15:04 UTC
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"heaad-desk" seemed more painful, therefore more appropriate. To me,
"face-palm" = OOPS! and "head-deask" = AAAARGGGHHHH!!!!

Ahem.

Peace!
Ster Julie
Alan Heah
2011-03-02 00:39:35 UTC
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("… I'…m… back!!!…" Russell Casse, movie Independence Day, at the end)

Dear Ster Julie,

I like the human side displayed by Spock throughout this writing.
I checked back on Amok Time, and understand that he'd likely behave
this way, emerging from Pon farr and kal-if-fee.
Still, your portrayal clearly shows what it is like to boldly express
this essential and vital part of his makeup.

I do not know how outdated I am to say this, but I thought this brave
new openness, to the humanness of Spock, may have begun with the Star
Trek XI reboot movie, featuring the new bunch of young people who
dared to explore where none previously did.
And then again, wily and wise old Spock Prime may have rubbed off well
on youthful alternative Spock.
But to see the original Spock Prime youth in a more familiar light
here… now that's something.

And it's only logical, honourably him to have mind set emotions in the
right place again, about Christine.
Not that many would not continue to howl in disapproval!
Ster Julie
2011-03-08 03:16:15 UTC
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<waves excitedly> Hi, Alan!

Oh, I beg to disagree with you as for STIX influencing me. Spock was
truly lightening up ever since V'Ger spewed him out in STTMP! As
evidence I present the Sickbay scene in that movie, the "Happy
Birthday" scene in ST2, (skip 3 & 4 due to SPock being katra-less or
otherwise changed from fal-tor pann),various scenes in ST5, the swat
away the phaser from Valeris scene in ST6, AND the Spock-meets-Spock
scene in STIX.. (Nimoy was just sublter in showing Spock's emotions
than Quinto.)

I am of the mind that Sarek may have raised Spock to be a Vulcan, but
Amanda insisted that he be a gentleman, and that gentleman knew he wad
to apologize to Chapel.

It's good to have you back!

Peace!
Ster Julie
Alan Heah
2011-03-11 14:23:55 UTC
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Thank you again, Ster Julie!
It's great to be back a little, amongst familiar friends.
Again, sorry to all here, for the reposting of my reply to all of you
earlier, which ended up by error as three posts to one recent OT
thread.

Yes, it's good that you built up on the emotional maturing (and
easing) of Spock down the (movie) years and decades.
He is indeed a changed man/Vulcan, when we finally(/last) saw him as
Prime, and yes, Nimoy portrayed him most lately with that classic self-
control (reminds me of those dry British wit types!).
Makes the Quinto one look a positive brat!

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